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Revision as of 19:19, 28 July 2023

Revision as of 19:19, 28 July 2023

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{{AFC submission|||u=Xlea Nollmav|ns=118|ts=20230428185611}} <!-- Do not remove this line! -->

{{AFC submission|d|corp|u=Xlea Nollmav|ns=118|decliner=CNMall41|declinets=20230412195822|ts=20230411213809}} <!-- Do not remove this line! -->

{{AFC submission|d|adv|u=Xlea Nollmav|ns=118|decliner=Greenman|declinets=20230222222012|small=yes|ts=20230206221016}} <!-- Do not remove this line! -->

{{AFC submission|d|adv|u=Xlea Nollmav|ns=118|decliner=AngusWOOF|declinets=20230117181914|small=yes|ts=20230117175018}} <!-- Do not remove this line! -->

{{AFC comment|1=Even with everything referenced and promotional tone fixed, the company does not meet [[WP:NCORP]]. References in the draft fail [[WP:ORGCRIT]] and a quick search online found nothing better. [[User:CNMall41|CNMall41]] ([[User talk:CNMall41|talk]]) 19:58, 12 April 2023 (UTC)}}

{{AFC comment|1=The submission is still exceptionally promotional. There is a reason [[WP:COI]] editing is strongly discouraged. [[User:Greenman|Greenman]] ([[User talk:Greenman|talk]]) 22:20, 22 February 2023 (UTC)}}

{{AFC comment|1=A lot of advertising verbiage about quality and other promotional tones is still in the article. Needs to be rewritten neutrally by someone not associated with the company.

Whole sections of the article remain unreferenced and seem to point to website's Our History sections rather than independent coverage by external news sources. [[User:AngusWOOF|<strong><span style="color: #606060;" class="nowrap">AngusW🐶🐶F</span></strong>]] ([[User talk:AngusWOOF#top|<span style=" color: #663300;">bark</span>]] • [[Special:Contributions/AngusWOOF|<span style="color: #006600;">sniff</span>]]) 18:19, 17 January 2023 (UTC)}}

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{{Short description|brand of canvas tent}}

{{AfC topic|product}}

{{Draft topics|north-america|business-and-economics}}

{{Paid contributions|date=November 2022}}

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== References ==

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