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{{AFC submission|d|v|u=Waxilo|ns=118|decliner=Bobby Cohn|declinets=20241004215043|ts=20241004203626}} <!-- Do not remove this line! -->
{{AFC comment|1=Guidance to the author has been given [[User_talk:Bobby_Cohn#SAKE_CHALLENGES|on my talk page]] and I've made some corrections to the work. You already have a good list of articles to work from, so follow the advice of [[WP:BACKWARD]] in your writing from here on out. Please continue to write the draft by describing the topic and not promoting any group or events, by writing about what sources have to say about the topic. [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 17:43, 5 October 2024 (UTC)}}
{{AFC comment|1=Wikipedia, as [[WP:UGC|user-generated content]], cannot be used as a [[WP:Reliable sources|reliable source]]. Instead, demonstrate what [[WP:Independent]] and [[WP:Secondary]] sources has said about the subject. [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 21:50, 4 October 2024 (UTC)}}
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