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Line 26: * ''Approximately a third'' -> ''Approximately one third'' ? * The '''In media''' section is a bit lame. Half of the section is material that was only just discussed in the previous section. Any chance of this being expanded to include specific examples, maybe even some misconceptions or something? ** Nope, sorry. This section was very deliberately whitted down to a bare minimum so that the article could focused on the scientific aspects of the belt. The main article link for that section contains a slew of examples and a discussion. The current article is past 32Kb. — [[User:RJHall\|RJH]] ([[User_talk:RJHall\|''talk'']]) Hopefully some of this helps, and thanks again for another interesting read. Cheers, [[User:Darkliight\|darkliight]]<sup>[[User_talk:Darkliight\|[πalk]]]</sup> 12:37, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

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