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However I think the article draft needs some work. What is "stop the world" in the lead? The references need a bit of cleanup. "Creator of Pony, Google Scholar" is not something to include as a reference. "Deny Capabilities for Safe, Fast Actors" is listed twice, once as a plain PDF. InfoQ sources probably OK. Can you fix these things and try again? [[User:Caleb Stanford|Caleb Stanford]] ([[User talk:Caleb Stanford|talk]]) 18:10, 8 March 2025 (UTC)}}
::Some parts of the critique seem opinionated. For instance, "stop the world" is a phrase from the references and originally placed into the lead by a previous editor. As this is still a draft, which has not been reviewed, it looks not to be a problem to fix factual errors, misquotes, or grammar. When it comes to matters of opinion or aesthetics, however, that appears to be more problematic or something to have been addressed in talk.[[User:Wukuendo|Wukuendo]] ([[User talk:Wukuendo|talk]]) 14:06, 9 March 2025 (UTC)
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