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However I think the article draft needs some work. What is "stop the world" in the lead? The references need a bit of cleanup. "Creator of Pony, Google Scholar" is not something to include as a reference. "Deny Capabilities for Safe, Fast Actors" is listed twice, once as a plain PDF. InfoQ sources probably OK. Can you fix these things and try again? [[User:Caleb Stanford|Caleb Stanford]] ([[User talk:Caleb Stanford|talk]]) 18:10, 8 March 2025 (UTC)}}
::Some parts of the critique seem opinionated. For instance, "stop the world" is a phrase from the references, used when referring to GCs, and originally placed into the lead by a previous editor. As this is still a draft, which has not been reviewed, it looks not to be a problem to
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