::{{AFC comment|1=Some parts of the critique seem opinionated. For instance, "stop the world" is a phrase from the references, used when referring to GCs, and originally placed into the lead by a previous editor. As this is still a draft, which has not been reviewed, it looks not to be a problem to correct errors, violations of rules, or grammar. When it comes to matters of opinion or aesthetics, however, that appears to be more problematic or something to have been addressed in talk.[[User:Wukuendo|Wukuendo]] ([[User talk:Wukuendo|talk]]) 16:00, 9 March 2025 (UTC)}}