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===[[Kitty Marion]]===
I need help with a single problematic sentence: ''"Marion earned her own living from the age of seventeen, and she never married''" I've tried to come up with a better way of stating those two thoughts (they are usually presented jointly in the sources) but I come up empty. I'm planning on taking this article to FA someday, so if you see any other issues, that would be appreciated. I'm happy to implement any changes, if you simply want to make suggestions. [[User:Noleander|Noleander]] ([[User talk:Noleander|talk]]) 15:41, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
*Hi {{u|Noleander}}, can you say a little more about what you think the issue with that sentence is? It's a little bit comma splice-y, but not so much so that it triggers my inner copyeditor, since the two thoughts are connected. So if you can be a little more specific about what part of it is rubbing you the wrong way, we may be able to offer more help then. [[User:Fluffernutter|Fluffernutter]] ([[User talk:Fluffernutter|talk]]) 12:49, 7 June 2025 (UTC)
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