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I think it's fine in length, however, the ending of the plot assumed the player completed the side missions of talking to the guide, finding the hidden stash, etc... So I changed it some, to reflect that if the player was lazy, he could also get the "fake" Wish Granter endings. [[User:72.66.73.16|72.66.73.16]] 16:50, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
It's too long and it doesn't make sense. Period. {{unsignedIP|203.27.231.250}}
:The plot should be a summary. The current version is an extensive description of the game and all of its back-story. Take a quick glance at it: the point at which the game begins is ''halfway'' through the plot section. That's far too wordy. It's written as if it was a transcription of everything that happens in the game. Not everything is that significant; it needs to be shortened in a digestible manner, or broken up into sections based on character interactions and endings. --[[User:Scottie_theNerd|<b><font color= "00CC00">Scottie_theNerd</font></b>]] 05:58, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
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