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*Click on <font color=darkblue>[Show]</font> at the right below this to discover ''where'' the text is faulty.
*Click on <font color=darkblue>[Show]</font> on the right below this to discover generally how the text is faulty.
*Click on <font color=darkblue>[Show]</font> to display our suggested solution, with explanations.
 
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<font color=black>There are four issues.
*A problem of logic and of vagueness.
*A wrong lexical item (thatwhich needs to be substituted with a more appropriate item).
*A false comparison.
*A MOS breach.