User:Tony1/Advanced editing exercises: Difference between revisions

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*An ugly word that has a coomon, shorter equivalent.

*An old-fashioned word.

*Opportunities for neater expression in two places (position___location underlined in "Where the issues are"below).

*An opportunity to split an over-long sentence (position___location underlined in "Where the issues are"below).

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