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*The first 2 sentances in the '''Cultural impact''' seem somewhat repetitive. can it be reworded somehow? --[[User:ZeWrestler|ZeWrestler]] 15:32, 14 July 2005 (UTC)
**The development diagram is up, and the cultural impacts section has been quite substantially rewritten and expanded.--[[User:Petaholmes|nixie]] 13:41, 21 July 2005 (UTC)
***The development diagram looks great. --[[User:ZeWrestler|<span style="color:green">ZeWrestler</span>]] [[user talk:ZeWrestler|<sup><span style="color:green">Talk</span></sup>]] 17:03, 21 July 2005 (UTC)