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**Would you change if I edited it to your liking? Because the guy who said it was too long doesn't seem like he'll change his vote anyway. -- [[User:A Link to the Past|A Link to the Past]] 00:17, August 18, 2005 (UTC)

**Oh yes, mav's right, the lead section needs an extra paragraph. {{User:Nichalp/sg}}

**'''Comment''': it seems odd to me that the article on the housecat is at [[Cat]] while the cat family is covered in a separate article; I'd expect the cat familiy to be the main topic at [[Cat]] and the domestic cat to be somewhere else, but maybe that's just me. Also, I agree with mav that the lead needs work; it should read like a mini-article in itself. [[User:Mindspillage|Mindspillage]] [[User talk:Mindspillage|(spill yours?)]] 18:53, 19 August 2005 (UTC)

*'''Support''', I'm no expert on cats so I have to trust the facts written, but the article seems fine in all other ways. -- <font face="fixedsys">[[User:Johan Elisson|Elisson]]</font> [[Special:Contributions/Johan Elisson|&bull;]] <font face="fixedsys">[[User talk:Johan Elisson|Talk]]</font> 22:14, 18 August 2005 (UTC)

**'''Comment''': it seems odd to me that the article on the housecat is at [[Cat]] while the cat family is covered in a separate article; I'd expect the cat familiyfamily to be the main topic at [[Cat]] and the domestic cat to be somewhere else, but maybe that's just me. Also,And I agree with mav that the lead needs work; it should read like a mini-article in itself. Also, it's not necessary for featuring, but it'd be nice if someone could get audio of meowing and purring sounds. [[User:Mindspillage|Mindspillage]] [[User talk:Mindspillage|(spill yours?)]] 1819:5307, 19 August 2005 (UTC)