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*I am concerned at the quality of some of the sources used in this article, for instance www.freshmeat.net.
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*As the lead is supposed to be an overview and a summary of the article I do not see the need for a separate Overview section immediately following it. Whatever is important in this section should be incorporated into the lead.
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*There appears to be a link to a blog at devbiz that is unavailable. Blogs cannot be considered reliable sources in any case.
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