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:Turns out that the 'Criticism' section was subverted by an anon three days ago who pasted what appears to be unformatted copy from some web page. I reverted the part he messed with. I am shocked that statements such as ''Microsoft is one of the most corrupt corporations in the world'' survived without having been reverted sooner. - [[User:Brian Kendig|Brian Kendig]] 14:55, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
I just put a Cleanup tag on the article; it's just messy. For example; there are ''three separate places'' which say that the company was founded in 1975: the second paragraph (as "Micro-Soft"), the top of the 'History' section, and the top of the '1975-84' section (as "Micro-soft"). The article's second and third paragraphs are redundant and should be merged with what's below. The '2000-05: legal issues' section title implies that the legal issues started in 2000 - they started at least ten years earlier, but the section itself begins with a mention of 1998! - [[User:Brian Kendig|Brian Kendig]] 15:30, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
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