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:[[User:Nickmalik|Nickmalik]] ([[User talk:Nickmalik|talk]]) 03:43, 15 April 2008 (UTC
== Comment - general ==
The current article is not well written, confuses much of the concepts of Business Process Modeling into the more generic topic of process modeling, and fails to clearly define the non-business types of process modeling in a coherent manner. The term Business Process was coined by Michael Hammer to differentiate Business Process from Manufacturing Process or Chemical Process.
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Now I noticed an older version, see [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Business_process_modeling&oldid=140846800 ''here''] of the [[Business process modelling]] has been merged here 1 July 2007 by Radagast83. I wonder if it would be better split the both and develop both articles separately some more. -- [[User:Mdd|Marcel Douwe Dekker]] ([[User talk:Mdd|talk]]) 00:14, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
== Comment on the Introduction ==
I was looking for a description to put in the disambiguation page [[Process]], which has a link to this article. I had to look far into the article for a good description or definition. The introduction needs to be improved.
[[User:Obankston|Obankston]] ([[User talk:Obankston|talk]]) 22:50, 7 November 2009 (UTC)
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