Wikipedia:Words to avoid: Difference between revisions

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*1999 saw the repeal of part of the [[Glass–Steagall Act]] by the [[Gramm–Leach–Bliley Act]].
*[[Vanessa Hudgens]]'s second album ''[[Identified]]'' saw limited chart success, reaching 46th position in the [[UK Albums Chart]].
 
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*In 1999, the [[Gramm–Leach–Bliley Act]] repealed part of the [[Glass–Steagall Act]].
*[[Vanessa Hudgens]]'s second album ''[[Identified]]'' experienced limited chart success, reaching 46th position in the [[UK Albums Chart]].
 
The second sentence could also be replaced by "[[Vanessa Hudgens]] saw her second album ''[[Identified]]'' experiencing limited chart success, reaching 46th position in the [[UK Albums Chart]]", as Vanessa Hudgens has eyes and is capable of seeing things.
 
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