Talk:I'm with Cupid/GA1: Difference between revisions

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:I'll take this one on. --'''[[User:Starstriker7|Starstriker7]]'''^{([[User talk:Starstriker7|Talk]])} 23:57, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

===Criteria 1a (Prose clear, spelling correct) and 1b (lead, layout, W2W, fiction, list stuff)===

====Lead====

*Valentine's day (capitalize Day)

*"Apu gives his wife "--> gives to his wife?

*"Apu, in order to sabotage" - Remove ", in order"

*"would air on" --> was to air on

*"to be relate to" --> to relate to

*The lead should also discuss stuff from the Cultural references section.

====Production====

*"Valentine's day" - capitalize Day

*The article says that the episode was created because it aired on Valentine's Day. I'm not quite sure what that means.

*Are you able to specify which the TV series that had an episode that conflicted with this episode's name?

*"He does not believe that copyright issues will arise though:" --> However, he did not believe that copyright issues would arise:

====Reception====

*The reviews are probably better described as generally positive. Not all the included reviews approved of the episode.

===Criterion 2a (All stuff cited, separate ref section)===

*The Plath ref [http://www.dvdtown.com/review/simpsons-the-the-complete-10th-season/dvd/5056/2 should link to page 2].

===Criterion 2b (Argue-able stuff is cited)===

*In the lead, cite the 7.7 million/48th place tidbit.

===Criterion 2c (WP:NOR)===

All clear here.