Talk:Weakly interacting massive particle: Difference between revisions

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Could someone with knowledge of the subject fix this sentence: "Although predicted scattering rates for WIMPs from nuclei are significant for large detector target masses, prediction that halo WIMPs may, as they pass through the Sun, interact with solar protons and helium nuclei."--[[User:ArnoldReinhold|agr]] ([[User talk:ArnoldReinhold|talk]]) 08:20, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

I SO agree! In essence it reads: "Although predicted scattering rates… are significant… prediction that halo WIMPs may... interact with solar protons and helium nuclei."

1. "prediction" should surely either be plural, or written as "a prediction" or "the prediction"?

2. The expectation brought about by "Although" is never satisfied! Evidently there should be something after nuclei, PLEASE could someone fill it in?

[[User:L0ngpar1sh|L0ngpar1sh]] ([[User talk:L0ngpar1sh|talk]]) 10:01, 3 November 2011 (UTC)