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Line 7: ==Message from [[User:\|User:]]== <p>Good job, Ana! The lead section provides a stand-alone concise summary of the article. You have avoided using field-specific jargon and explained them when necessary. </p> <p>Here are some suggestions on how to improve the article: The lead section does not provides a stand-alone concise summary of the article. </p> <p> Click [http://hciresearch2.hcii.cs.cmu.edu/~rfarzan/wikipedia/tool/peer/message.php?from=1092&to= here] to reply</p> <p>[[User:InstructorCommentBot\|InstructorCommentBot]] ([[User talk:InstructorCommentBot\|talk]]) 02:58, 3 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of [[User:\|User:]] ([[User_talk:\|talk]]) </p> ==Message from [[User:Linnea\|Linnea]]== <p>Good job, Ana! The lead section provides a stand-alone concise summary of the article. You have avoided using field-specific jargon and explained them when necessary. </p> <p>Here are some suggestions on how to improve the article: The lead section does not provides a stand-alone concise summary of the article. </p> <p> Click [http://hciresearch2.hcii.cs.cmu.edu/~rfarzan/wikipedia/tool/peer/message.php?from=1092&to=402 here] to reply</p> <p>[[User:InstructorCommentBot\|InstructorCommentBot]] ([[User talk:InstructorCommentBot\|talk]]) 03:00, 3 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of [[User:Linnea Ng\|Linnea Ng]] ([[User_talk:Linnea Ng\|talk]]) </p>

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