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==Message from [[User:Linnea|Linnea]]==
<p>Good job, Ana! The lead section provides a stand-alone concise summary of the article. You have avoided using field-specific jargon and explained them when necessary. </p> <p>Here are some suggestions on how to improve the article: The lead section does not provides a stand-alone concise summary of the article. </p> <p> Click [http://hciresearch2.hcii.cs.cmu.edu/~rfarzan/wikipedia/tool/peer/message.php?from=1092&to=402 here] to reply</p> <p>[[User:InstructorCommentBot|InstructorCommentBot]] ([[User talk:InstructorCommentBot|talk]]) 03:00, 3 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of [[User:Linnea Ng|Linnea Ng]] ([[User_talk:Linnea Ng|talk]]) </p>
==Message from [[User:Linnea|Linnea]]==
<p>Good Job, Ana!
LEAD SECTION:Your lead section is a stand-alone concise summary of the article.
LANGUGE:Try to avoid using field-specific jargon and explain them when necessary, for example: .
LINKS:You have provided links to other Wikipedia articles.
CATEGORY:You have categorized the page.
</p> <p></p> <p> Click [http://hciresearch2.hcii.cs.cmu.edu/~rfarzan/wikipedia/tool/peer/message.php?from=1092&to=402 here] to reply</p> <p>[[User:InstructorCommentBot|InstructorCommentBot]] ([[User talk:InstructorCommentBot|talk]]) 15:01, 3 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of [[User:Linnea Ng|Linnea Ng]] ([[User_talk:Linnea Ng|talk]]) </p>
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