Talk:Development of Duke Nukem Forever/GA1: Difference between revisions

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*So far prose looks pretty good. No quick spot-check issues.
*Please update the descriptions of [[:File:Duke Nukem Screenshot2.jpg]] and [[:File:Dukenukemforever2007.jpg]] to explain why it's necessary for the reader to see these. The captions should also be updated with similar information. In other words, why are we showing these images to the reader?
*[http://www.shacknews.com/docs/press/20090518_dnf_3dr_.x http://www.shacknews.com/docs/press/20090518_dnf_3dr_.x] is dead. Can you see if the URL has been adjusted by ShackNews or if it can be replaced?
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