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:*[http://www.squidcakes.blogspot.com/ http://www.squidcakes.blogspot.com/] (#45)
:*[http://liquidmesh3d.com/animation.html http://liquidmesh3d.com/animation.html] (#61)
::* Well, it seems the issue can be ignored entirely. #61 doesn't have the quote that was cited anymore, and neither #44 and #45 seemed to directly relate to the point, but I was able to find an alternate link that seems to relate to the prose.
*So far prose looks pretty good. No quick spot-check issues.
:* Hooray!
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:* As far as my Edit > Find searches are showing, that was the only one.
*Inline citations belong immediately after punctuation marks ([[WP:CITEFOOT]]). I know there's at least one in the '''Gearbox revival and release, 2010–2011''' section
'''Reviewer:''' [[User:Teancum|Teancum]] ([[User talk:Teancum|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Teancum|contribs]]) 14:51, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
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