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**{{Fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 22:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
*I've tagged 4 dead links using Checklinks. There's also a {{cn}} needing fixed, but that might be covered by ref 46.
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*"first stage is now being flight tested" - very liable to dating. Given that you and some other editors have focused on this article for a fair length of time, it should be OK, but an {{tl|As of}} or {{tl|Update after}} could be used.
**{{Fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 22:26, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
*"News of the new test rocket" - "News of the test rocket"
**{{Fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 22:40, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
*"re-entry database" - not sure what this is. From the context, it seems to be data that will allow a computer to work out where it will land, but I could be quite far off the mark.
**{{Fixed}} It is really just a bunch of wind tunnel test data that shows how a very large rocket body (about 3.3 metres in diameter and over 50 metres long behaves at a bunch of different velocities and altitudes in the atmosphere, with the rocket body moving through the atmosphere in various orientations. It's all quite essential for coding up the control algorithms to tell the engines and thrusters what to do based on where the returning rocket finds itself. But I can really see how that esoteric info was quite unclear with the term "re-entry database". Good catch! — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 22:40, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
*[[NASA]] can be linked in the first instance.
*"reusable rocket system that will be powered by LOX/methane, "an evolution of SpaceX's Falcon 9 booster", and reiterated SpaceX's commitment to develop a vertical landing breakthrough technology." - "reusable rocket system to be powered by LOX/methane, "an evolution of SpaceX's Falcon 9 booster", and reiterated SpaceX's commitment to develop a vertical landing technology." - update tense, rm "breakthrough" - don't think it's needed.
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