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*"...flight tests of the vehicle are to occur in Texas." - ref needed.
*"...and did so." - this is quite abrupt, and also needs a ref. I can't help but feel that there is a nicer way to say it.
*"Four additional test flights were made in August 2013." - another ref, or instance of ref.
*"Grasshopper version 1.0... and is 106 feet (32 m) tall." - is quite clumsy. Perhaps "Grasshopper version 1.0, the company's first test vehicle, consisted of a Falcon 9 [v1.0] first stage tank and pressuriser with a single Merlin-1D engine. It had four steel landing legs and a support structure, and stood 106 feet (32 m) tall." or something like that.
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