Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions

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*"In an arrangement unusual for launch vehicles,[18] some first stages of the SpaceX Falcon 9 v1.1 versions of the rocket are testing propulsive-return, over-water aspects of the reusable rocket technology." - this is quite confusing, and it is unclear what the ref supports - I would move it to the end of the sentence. Another ref might be needed in that paragraph.

*"Falcon 9 test plan calls for the" - does this need to be updated?

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*{{cn}} needs addressed at the end of that paragraph.

**{{Fixed}}. I just reused the reference at the beginning of the next paragraph, since that whole paragraph about that very flight. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*"With the many..." - quite colloquial.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*The '''See also''' section would ideally be removed if a good way to link to [[Falcon (rocket family)]] can be found.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 19:48, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

I'll wait for you to make any changes you feel are necessary and look at it again in a few days. Sorry for the delay in completing this review - I've been quite heavily occupied for the past few weeks. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]^x[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 18:32, 8 March 2014 (UTC)