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::''The "Advantages of Community-Based Program Design" and the "Challenges of Community-Based Program Design" could be combined into one large heading of "Advantages and Challenges" with two subsections of "Advantages" and "Challenges." By saying "of Community-Based Program Design" after advantages and challenges (whether heading or subsection) it kind of makes the page a bit busier than it needs to be.''--[[User:Ubuntu713|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713|talk]]) 00:12, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
:: I agree combining the sections would be helpful. I would also recommend placing this before you discuss the "Program Design Tools" because it provides important description that would be helpful context to have while reading about the tools. --[[User:Amynav|Amynav]] ([[User talk:Amynav|talk]]) 01:03, 11 March 2014 (UTC)amynav
::Also, try to be more specific when describing the advantages. You say, "gaining insight into the social context of an issue or problem mutual learning experiences, broadening understanding of professional roles in the community" with out having a clear noun/actor in the sentence. Be sure to describe who is gaining? Mutual learning between who? What do you mean by professional roles?--[[User:Amynav|Amynav]] ([[User talk:Amynav|talk]]) 01:03, 11 March 2014 (UTC)amynav
===Challenges of community-based program design===
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