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Line 20: ::''Additionally, the introductory definition of community-based program design seems a bit clunky and utilizes unaccessible language that is not linked to other wikipedia pages. Maybe try looking for and using a more succinct definition.''--[[User:Ubuntu713\|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713\|talk]]) 00:01, 10 March 2014 (UTC) ::"I agree with the comments above. It might be best to start the intro with a sentence that gives the main goal of community-based program design. Using the quote given above, maybe you could start with "Community-based program design utilizes a range of tools and models that are used to enhance the efficacy and outcomes of a program's design" (cite). Then you can touch on who utilizes this program design and perhaps briefly introduce a few of the tools..." [[User:Millelin\|Millelin]] ([[User talk:Millelin\|talk]]) 01:47, 11 March 2014 (UTC) ===History===

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