Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions

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*"Falcon 9 test plan calls for the" - does this need to be updated?

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

:::I did some further copyediting on this. Since it is an introductory paragraph to the section, I think it best for it to describe the general test plan for these post-mission booster descent tests, not just any one particular test. The test history is better covered in the paragraphs below the introduction. See what you think. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 16:02, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*{{cn}} needs addressed at the end of that paragraph.

**<s>**{{Fixed}}. I just reused the reference at the beginning of the next paragraph, since that whole paragraph about that very flight. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)</s> Never mind, I didn't actually fix this, I fixed something else instead:P. Sorry. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:05, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.

**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

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**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]_{<small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small>} 19:48, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

I'll wait for you to make any changes you feel are necessary and look at it again in a few days. Sorry for the delay in completing this review - I've been quite heavily occupied for the past few weeks. [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]^x[[User talk:Jamesx12345|12345]] 18:32, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

::Thanks very much [[User:Jamesx12345|James]]! Glad you made it through the entire article. I'll get back to addressing your review comments starting today.

::In the meantime, I see that another editor has helpfully joined in to help get the article improved to GA quality. Thanks [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]! [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 16:02, 11 March 2014 (UTC)