Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions

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**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 17:52, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*"...and did so." - this is quite abrupt, and also needs a ref. I can't help but feel that there is a nicer way to say it.

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 18:03, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*"Four additional test flights were made in August 2013." - another ref, or instance of ref.

**{{fixed}} — [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 18:03, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

*"Grasshopper version 1.0... and is 106 feet (32 m) tall." - is quite clumsy. Perhaps "Grasshopper version 1.0, the company's first test vehicle, consisted of a Falcon 9 [v1.0] first stage tank and pressuriser with a single Merlin-1D engine. It had four steel landing legs and a support structure, and stood 106 feet (32 m) tall." or something like that.

*"In an arrangement unusual for launch vehicles,[18] some first stages of the SpaceX Falcon 9 v1.1 versions of the rocket are testing propulsive-return, over-water aspects of the reusable rocket technology." - this is quite confusing, and it is unclear what the ref supports - I would move it to the end of the sentence. Another ref might be needed in that paragraph.