Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions

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tidied up a few more; left a few questions for Jamesx12345.
tweak indention; plus fixed one more item on the GA reviewer list
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******That's a good solution. I wasn't sure what the standard is for that sort of thing (leave the link? take it out? what sort of note to leave? etc.) I'm very glad that you, as an experienced GA reviewer, knew what to do with that.
::::::In the meantime, I think I still have a couple more of the deadlinks to crawl through, and a few more "in process" items to work. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 21:36, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
******::::::*{{Yellow tick}}—[[User:Jamesx12345|James]], I've looked and believe there are no more dead links. But I don't know how to use ''checklinks'', so if you would please take a look at this and then let us know if you are good to go. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 20:50, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
 
*"first stage is now being flight tested" - very liable to dating. Given that you and some other editors have focused on this article for a fair length of time, it should be OK, but an {{tl|As of}} or {{tl|Update after}} could be used.
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**<s>{{Fixed}}. I just reused the reference at the beginning of the next paragraph, since that whole paragraph about that very flight. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)</s> Never mind, I didn't actually fix this, I fixed something else instead:P. Sorry. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:05, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.
**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
***{{Fixed}}—for real, this time. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 20:57, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
*"With the many..." - quite colloquial.
**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)