Talk:SpaceX reusable launch system development program/GA1: Difference between revisions

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tweak indention; plus fixed one more item on the GA reviewer list
correction to my last comment, which I had placed on the wrong item
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*{{cn}} needs addressed at the end of that paragraph.
**<s>{{Fixed}}. I just reused the reference at the beginning of the next paragraph, since that whole paragraph about that very flight. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)</s> Never mind, I didn't actually fix this, I fixed something else instead:P. Sorry. &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:05, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.
**{Fixed} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
***{{Fixed}}—for real, this time. [[User:N2e|N2e]] ([[User talk:N2e|talk]]) 20:57, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
 
*"the booster stage attitude was reversed" - also confusing.
**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
 
*"With the many..." - quite colloquial.
**{{Fixed}} &mdash; [[User:Gopher65|Gopher65]]<sub><small>[[User_talk:Gopher65|<font color="green">talk</font>]]</small></sub> 20:03, 9 March 2014 (UTC)