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Line 45: ::''These paragraphs my flow better in this order (the second and third one have been switched).''--[[User:Ubuntu713\|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713\|talk]]) 00:05, 10 March 2014 (UTC) :::Thanks for the feedback. [[User:Umich hudsonmh\|Umich hudsonmh]] ([[User talk:Umich hudsonmh\|talk]]) 22:26, 14 March 2014 (UTC) ::" I would consider tying the last paragraph (the informal community-based programs) with the previous paragraphs a little more than you have, I think that's why it feels disjointed and doesn't flow well for me... for example, you could say "Although social work has been historically defined by these institutionalized and deinstitutionalized periods, informal community design programs have always been around...or something like that"-then proceed with the Melvin Delgado quote." [[User:Millelin\|Millelin]] ([[User talk:Millelin\|talk]]) 02:36, 11 March 2014 (UTC) :::Better transition into new paragraph. Thanks! [[User:Umich hudsonmh\|Umich hudsonmh]] ([[User talk:Umich hudsonmh\|talk]]) 22:26, 14 March 2014 (UTC) ===Incomplete list of notable contributors to the community-based approach===

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