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::''As mentioned previously, the intro paragraph for this section could definitely be incorporated into your overall general description. I think it is a toss up as to whether or not it is really needed in this section if mentioned previously, but I do not think it would be bad to keep it here.'' --[[User:Ubuntu713|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713|talk]]) 23:53, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:::Revised [[User:Umich hudsonmh|Umich hudsonmh]] ([[User talk:Umich hudsonmh|talk]]) 22:36, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::''The below levels of the Socio-Ecological Model could be reformatted to look more visually appealing. Also, in your first draft organizational was misspelled, so just a heads up on remembering to do a final spellcheck and edit.''--[[User:Ubuntu713|Ubuntu713]] ([[User talk:Ubuntu713|talk]]) 23:53, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:::Thanks! [[User:Umich hudsonmh|Umich hudsonmh]] ([[User talk:Umich hudsonmh|talk]]) 22:36, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::"To be specific about formatting, make sure the socio-ecological model is the same height as its corresponding section. The way it is spanning down the page (alongside entirely different models) is confusing." [[User:Millelin|Millelin]] ([[User talk:Millelin|talk]]) 02:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:::Good point. Thanks. [[User:Umich hudsonmh|Umich hudsonmh]] ([[User talk:Umich hudsonmh|talk]]) 22:36, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::''See formatting below for list'' --[[User:Blunthought|Blunthought]] ([[User talk:Blunthought|talk]]) 00:08, 10 March 2014 (UTC)