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{{ping|Zackmann08}}Here's what I've got so far if you want to add anything to it. I'd like to push it into article space and have it go live. [[User:Maxwellwarner|Maxwellwarner]] ([[User talk:Maxwellwarner|talk]]) 00:52, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
:{{ping|Maxwellwarner}} my only comment would be avoid having headings that just have one sentence below them. Instead of:
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===Membership===
*The department must respond at least four firefighters to structure fires. The chief may account for one of those required positions.
===Training===
*The department must conduct at least two hours of training every two months for active firefighters.
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Try this:
<pre>
;Membership
:The department must respond at least four firefighters to structure fires. The chief may account for one of those required positions.
;Training
:The department must conduct at least two hours of training every two months for active firefighters.
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This second alternative will give you:
;Membership
:The department must respond at least four firefighters to structure fires. The chief may account for one of those required positions.
;Training
:The department must conduct at least two hours of training every two months for active firefighters.
Headings are for big sections. Does that make sense? --[[User:Zackmann08|Zackmann08]] ([[User talk:Zackmann08|talk]]) 00:59, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
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