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<font color=green>QUESTION A</font><br/>Gregorian chant is the best-known repertory of plainchant, a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred song, which was developed in the Catholic Church, mainly in <br/>
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*However, being singular, “this” could refer back to any of the four singular items in the first <br/>sentence: “Gregorian chant”, “best-known repertory”, “plainchant”, or “a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred song”. That would be fuzzy.
*To make it clear, you’ll probably need to restate one of these items at the start of your new sentence.
<br/><b>Gregorian chant is the best-known repertory of plainchant, a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred so<font color=crimson>ng, which</font> was developed in the Catholic Church, mainly in <br/>
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<font color=green>SOLUTION</font> </div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b>Gregorian chant is the best-known repertory of plainchant, a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred so<font color=crimson>ng. Plainchant</font> was developed in the Catholic Church, mainly in <br/>
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