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*A good ___location for a break is about half-way through (see the <font color=crimson>red text</font> below).
*You ''could'' start your new, second sentence with “This ...”.
*However, being singular, “this” could refer back to any of the four singular items in the first <br/>sentence: “Gregorian chant”, “best-known repertory”, “plainchant”, or “a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred song”. That would be fuzzy.
*To make it clear, you’ll probably need to restate one of these items at the start of your new sentence.
<br/><b><font color=midnightblue>Gregorian chant is the best-known repertory of plainchant, a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred so<font color=crimson>ng, which</font> was developed in the Catholic Church, mainly in <br/>the Frankish lands during the ninth and tenth centuries, with later additions and redactions.
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*Here, again, you’ll need to tweak the grammar and repeat an item in the new sentence, <br/>preferably not straight after the previous occurrence.
<br/><b><font color=midnightblue>However, ardent debate between political factions known as the Federalists and <br/>anti-Federalists ensued over the balance between strengthening the nation’s <br/>government and weakening the rights of the <font color=crimson>people who</font> just 10 years earlier had <br/>rebelled against the perceived tyranny of George III of England, particularly his <br/>unwillingness to change the taxation regime.
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*We inserted "same" ("the same people") to retain the writer's emphasis.
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*This is long enough to split in several ways; our solution is just one.
*We opted to repeat the main item ("the phrase") some way into the second <br/>sentence. See if you can work out where.
<b><font color=midnightblue>As such, the comic strip holds a unique place in British football folklore, demonstrated <br/>most clearly by the phrase “real Roy of the Rovers stuf<font color=crimson>f”, which is</font> typically used <br/>by football writers and commentators to describe displays of great skill or results <br/>that go against the odds, as a reference to the dramatic storylines that became <br/>the trademark of the comic strip.
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*Like "the same people" in the previous exercise, the key back-reference here <br/>("the phrase") is in the middle of the second sentence. This sometimes works well.
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*Bring the subject of this long sentence back to the start; and
*make two stand-alone sentences, each starting with the (same) subject.
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*You might consider avoiding the repetition of the subject ("the system") by using a semicolon <br/>at the same boundary, instead of a full-stop. The magic of a semicolon is that you can use <br/>"it" to refer right back to the start of the statement.
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<br/><b><font color=darkgreen>The system was originally developed for racing cars to prevent the foaming <br/>of the engine oil by the crankshaft, which created a serious drop in oil <br/>pressu<font color=crimson>re; it</font> circulated 12 litres of oil between the storage tank—mounted inside<br/> the right-front fender—and the engi<font color=crimson>ne. This compared favourably with</font> the usual four or five litres <br/> that circulated in V8s with a standard oil pan and pump.
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