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Exercise two: re Tony
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::However, ardent debate ensued between political factions known as the Federalists and anti-Federalists over the balance between strengthening the nation’s government and weakening the rights of the people.
:Or does that just open a new can of worms by separating the verb from "over"? "Ensue" here has two prepositions, so it can't be next to both, and I guess I just like seeing the verb earlier in the sentence. Not a big deal though. Question C: Cool =). --[[User:Spangineer|Spangineer]]<sup>[[:es:Usuario:Spangineer|es]]</sup>&nbsp;<small><font color="brown">[[User talk:Spangineer|(háblame)]]</font></small> 13:07, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
 
"Over" was the word I was looking for yesterday (Question B). I think I'll use your suggestion. Thanks muchly. [[User:Tony1|Tony]] 14:49, 4 August 2006 (UTC)