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<font color=midnightblue>QUESTION B<br/>However, ardent debate ensued between political factions known as the Federalists and <br/>and anti-Federalists ensued over the balance between strengthening the nation’s <br/>government and weakening the rights of the people who just 10 years earlier had <br/> rebelled against the perceived tyranny of George III of England, particularly his <br/>unwillingness to change the taxation regime.

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*Here, again, you’ll need to tweak the grammar and repeat an item in the new sentence, <br/>preferably not straight after the previous occurrence.

<br/><b><font color=midnightblue>However, ardent debate ensued between political factions known as the Federalists and <br/>and anti-Federalists ensued over the balance between strengthening the nation’s <br/>government and weakening the rights of the <font color=crimson>people who</font> just 10 years earlier had <br/>rebelled against the perceived tyranny of George III of England, particularly his <br/>unwillingness to change the taxation regime.

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[[Image:Hemingway's writing desk in Key West.jpg|thumb|right|250px|The writing desk of Ernest Hemmingway (1899–1961), an American novelist whose distinctive writing style is characterised by economy and understatement.]]

===Exercise 3: smoothly integrating ideas into a sentence===