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Line 85: <div style="clear:both;" class="NavFrame"> <div class="NavHead" style="text-align:left; height:2em; font-size:100%;"> <font color=darkgreen>SOLUTION </div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b><font color=green>However, ardent debate ensued between political factions known as the Federalists ~~and~~ <br/>and anti-Federalists ~~ensued~~ over the balance between strengthening the nation’s <br/>government and weakening the rights of the peopl<font color=crimson>e. J</font>ust 10 years earlier<font color=crimson>, the same people</font> had <br/>rebelled against the perceived tyranny of George III of England, particularly his <br/>unwillingness to change the taxation regime.</b></b> *We inserted "same" ("the same people") to retain the writer's emphasis.

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