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http://johnmcdonald.net.au/2015/shaun-gladwell/ [[User:Zenopharmakon|Zenopharmakon]] ([[User talk:Zenopharmakon|talk]]) 00:40, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

::'''Comment'''[[User:Zenopharmakon|Zenopharmakon]]: with respect, the two refs you mention are not very strong. The first is one sentence, and the second is two sentences and it does not even mention "Patafunctions" directly, just obliquely. The second is very fine writing that would fit very nicely into the main article. [[User:HappyValleyEditor|HappyValleyEditor]] ([[User talk:HappyValleyEditor|talk]]) 18:35, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:HappyValleyEditor|HappyValleyEditor]], Good Suggestion, I'm all for inclusion of the John McDonald criticism inwithin the article itself. McDonald is a very powerful voice in Australian Art Criticism and critically engages Gladwell on the occasion of every major public offering by the artist makes in Australia. McDonald's comments also intended to be included in Gladwell's bio under the "criticisms" section, But I'm no longer editing the page(s) before working out COI issues. [[User:Gladderz|Gladderz]] ([[User talk:Gladderz|talk]]) 23:26, 26 April 2016 (UTC)