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<font color=darkgreen>SOLUTION</font> </div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b><font color=green>The Earth's atmosphere has no definite boundary, slowly becoming thinner until <br/>it fades into outer space. Three-quarters of the atmosphere's mass<font color=crimson><s>, however,</s></font> is <br/>contained within the first 11 kilometres of the planet's surface.<br/
*</b>The second sentence just adds more information, so "however", with its commas, <br/>should be removed.</div>
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<font color=darkgreen>SOLUTION</font> </div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b><font color=green>He is the elder brother of Oasis frontman Liam
*In most contexts, announcing that they're brothers and telling us that they squabble will be too different to belong in the one sentence, particularly a short one. Inserting a comma before "and" would be better than nothing, but a semicolon instead of "and" provides a more distinct boundary between the ideas.
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<font color=green>SOLUTION</div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b><br/><font color=green>The ranges of ''L. raniformis'' and ''L. castanea'' overlap with that of the Green and <br/>Golden Bell
*</b>Again, the two clauses are too different to be linked with
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