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<font color=darkgreen>SOLUTION</font> </div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b><font color=green>The Earth's atmosphere has no definite boundary, slowly becoming thinner until <br/>it fades into outer space. Three-quarters of the atmosphere's mass<font color=crimson><s>, however,</s></font> is <br/>contained within the first 11 kilometres of the planet's surface.<br/>
*</b></b>The second sentence just adds more information, so "however", with its commas, <br/>should be removed.</div>
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<font color= greendarkgreen>SOLUTION</div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b><br/><font color=green>The ranges of ''L. raniformis'' and ''L. castanea'' overlap with that of the Green and <br/>Golden Bell Fro<font color=crimson>g; t</font>he general body shape and coloration of the three species are similar.<br/> *</b></b>Again, the two clauses are too different to be linked with a comma + and</font>.
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<font color=greenmidnightblue>QUESTION E</font><br/>GregorianHe chantformed isseveral thebands best-knownwhile repertoryat ofhigh plainchant,school: athe form of monophonicfirst, <br/>unaccompaniedThe sacredShadow songBlasters, which was developedshort-lived, inbut the Catholic Churchsecond, mainly inThe <br/>westernGolden and central Europe during the period 800–1000Chords, withlasted later additions and redactionslonger.</div>
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<b><font color=greenblack>HINT</font><br/></b>
*</b>How are the two clauses related?
*A good ___location for a break is about half-way through (see the <font color=crimson>red text</font> below).
*You ''could'' start your new, second sentence with “This ...”.
*However, being singular, “this” could refer back to any of the four singular items in the first <br/>sentence: “Gregorian chant”, “best-known repertory”, “plainchant”, or “a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred song”. That would be very fuzzy.
*To make it clear, you’ll need to restate one of these items at the start of your new sentence.
<br/><b>Gregorian chant is the best-known repertory of plainchant, a form of monophonic, <br/>unaccompanied sacred so<font color=crimson>ng, which</font> was developed in the Catholic Church, mainly in <br/>western and central Europe during the period 800–1000, with later additions and redactions.
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<font color= greendarkgreen>SOLUTION </font> </div><div class="NavContent" style="text-align:left; display: none;"><b> Gregorian<font chantcolor=darkgreen>He isformed theseveral best-knownbands repertorywhile ofat plainchant,high aschool: form ofthe monophonicfirst, <br/> unaccompaniedThe sacredShadow soBlasters, was short-live<font color=crimson> ng.d; Plainchantt</font> he was developed in the Catholic Churchsecond, mainly inThe <br/> westernGolden and central Europe during the period 800–1000Chords, withlasted later additions and redactionslonger. </font></b> *</b>Since the second clause in no way contradicts the first, comma + "and", or a semicolon will do the trick.
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