Talk:Community-based program design/GA2: Difference between revisions

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#Is it '''reasonably well written'''?

#:: "Community-based program design is a social program design" - two uses of 'program design' within seven words reads poorly.

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#::"This program design approach depends on the participatory approach" - same issue with two uses of the word 'approach' within six words.

#::"One advantage is a learning experience between a consumer and a social services provider.[2] One disadvantage is a limited availability of resources" - merge this into one sentence.

#::"The models that can be used for it are ..." I can honestly say this is the longest single sentence I've ever seen on Wikipedia. You need to break it up.

#::"the change around us" - is 'us' the right word here? Would it be better as the change around 'the community', or just 'the change'?

#Is it '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''?

#:A. Has an [[Wikipedia:LAYOUT#Standard_appendices_and_footers|appropriate reference section]]: