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#::"the change around us" - is 'us' the right word here? Would it be better as the change around 'the community', or just 'the change'?
#::'''History'''
#::"by quoting Harper (1990) regarding" - this isn't a university essay. We don't quote sources on Wikipedia like this. I suggest rewording it to something like 'by quoting a 1990 [whatever the medium was, i.e journal] by [author's full name]"
#::Try and avoid one-sentence paragraphs if you can. Can you expand the final paragraph somehow?
#::'''Program design tools'''
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#:: "are to: 1) recognize" - don't number things like this in standard prose.
#Is it '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''?
#:A. Has an [[Wikipedia:LAYOUT#Standard_appendices_and_footers|appropriate reference section]]: {{GAList/check|?}}
#::The Sternin source needs to state the publisher and/or journal.
#::The McCawley source looks like it could use more parameters, either the journal or an accessdate.
#:B. Citation to reliable sources [[Wikipedia:Good article criteria/where necessary|where necessary]]: {{GAList/check|n}}
#::Un-sourced statements:
#:C. [[Wikipedia:No original research|No original research]]: ▼
#::"Formally, community-based program development has been professionalized by such disciplines as urban studies and planning and social work."
#::"Other advantages of community-based program design are collaborative participation, enriching diversity, serving clients in their community, and addressing and meeting the needs of the community."
#::"Limited resources result in high levels of staff turnover and reliance upon unpaid volunteers."
#::"This model typically demonstrates five levels of influence, although this may vary depending on the application. The five levels usually include:"
#::"The underlying purpose of constructing a logic model is to assess the "if-then" (causal) relationships between the elements of a program. Community-based program designers can employ logic models to ensure that program inputs (available community resources) will support the activities of the community-based program, and that the outputs (resulting from the activities) will lead to the program's desired outcomes."
▲#:C. [[Wikipedia:No original research|No original research]]: {{GAList/check|?}}
#:: As above
#Is it '''broad in its coverage'''?
#:A. [[Wikipedia:Out of scope|Major aspects]]:
#:: This isn't a topic I'm at all familiar with. I might ask for a second opinion on this issue.
#:B. [[WP:LENGTH|Focused]]: {{GAList/check|y}}
#Is it '''[[WP:NPOV|neutral]]'''? {{GAList/check|y}}▼
#:Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}▼
▲#Is it '''[[WP:NPOV|neutral]]'''?
▲#:Fair representation without bias:
#Is it '''stable'''? {{GAList/check|y}}
#: No [[Wikipedia:Edit warring|edit wars]], etc: {{GAList/check|y}}
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