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#::<s>"One advantage is a learning experience between a consumer and a social services provider.[2] One disadvantage is a limited availability of resources" - merge this into one sentence.</s>
#::"The models that can be used for it are ..." I can honestly say this is the longest single sentence I've ever seen on Wikipedia. You need to break it up.
#::<s>"Formally, community-based program development has been professionalized by such disciplines as urban studies and planning and social work." - As well as being un-sourced, this sentence no longer appears in the body. Anything that is not mentioned in the body should not be in the lead.</s>
#::<s>"the change around us" - is 'us' the right word here? Would it be better as the change around 'the community', or just 'the change'?</s>
#::'''History'''
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