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== Critica ==

Two waterspouts capped by a cloud appear near Hawaii -- water goes up one spout and down the other. These curiosities, along with ball lightning, mysterious disappearances, and a number of other strange phenomena, all turn out to be the doing of never-seen atmospheric intelligences as superior to us as we are to fish.

Due getti d'acqua incappucciati da una nuvola appaiono vicino alle Hawaii - l'acqua sale per uno dei getti e scende giù per l'altro. Queste curiosità, insieme con fulmini globulari, sparizioni misteriose e una serie di altri fenomeni strani, tutti risultano essere opera di delle intelligenze atmosferiche mai viste, tanto superiori a noi quanto noi lo siamo ai pesci.

The story is merely a statement of this situation, with the supposedly ironic comparison of us to fish hammered home at the end. However no resolution of the situation is offered, and 10,000 words seem a lot to spend on a dead irony.

This is more yard goods, the sort of thing that can be turned out by the ream without thinking.