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::Badagnani, I am not picking on you specifically, but I do '''not''' believe this is a good article. Again, the revert war both pro and anti is too much. The article is in fact not balanced and it is not a good resource. The main page needs to combine both good and bad. Perhaps a timeline of the events could be spun off to it's own article. This article needs much help, but the edit wars are frustrating. Go and look at another article of controversy like George Bush or Bill O'Reilly (the commentator) or Al Franken and you will see a better balance. Granted, some of them could use cleaning too, but they do a much better presentation than this one. Clean up is definately needed. I will edit my reasons to add a 4th one that perhaps the timeline could be split off into it's own article thus shortning the main for more "meat" rather than the fluff. Lastly, you again keep interpreting the article to say and influence the reader. The articles "don't say" the names are missing. If you want to state that, then it needs to be outside of the quote and maybe in a dispute section. Don't interpret the article be they pro or anti. --{{user0|Maniwar}} 16:12, 20 October 2006 (UTC)
:I believe I did already explain that the timeline was removed to a separate article. What you notice about the lack of flow of the article probably results from the fact that it has been hacked to pieces by numerous editors on a constant basis since its inception (including, as discussed earlier, cutting entire sections out and moving them to other articles), but, if you've been editing this article for any length of time, you'll note that it has arrived in this state through the consensus of editors. [[User:Badagnani|Badagnani]] 16:30, 20 October 2006 (UTC)
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