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:Agree, both the amount of detail and its placement as a prominent lead paragraph are undue weight. Several of these numbers are also only based on the organization's information from press releases and interviews, and do not represent significant lead-worthy milestones (which should be established by in-depth coverage in truely independent non-PR publications). [[User:GermanJoe|GermanJoe]] ([[User talk:GermanJoe|talk]]) 02:47, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
 
== REQ: punc fix, cap fix ==
 
Could an established editor please fix the punctuation and capitalization errors (especially in the introductory section)?<!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/108.68.84.198|108.68.84.198]] ([[User talk:108.68.84.198#top|talk]]) 16:27, 5 July 2013 (UTC)</small>