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Just want to add if we were dealing with a small Fire Department operated by City of X, that is like the planning department or taxation department at the City and we could merge the page into the City of X page if the department is not independantly notable. The City not the Department would be the inhabited place. Hope that helps and does not confuse more. [[User:Legacypac|Legacypac]] ([[User talk:Legacypac|talk]]) 03:25, 3 November 2018 (UTC)

== https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:William_Worsley_(forester) ==

Hi,

Thanks for reviewing my submission, however i after a bit of assistance as i am struggling to see how i have fallen foul of submission on my page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:William_Worsley_(forester).

William Worsleys fathers page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marcus_Worsley has fewer references, as does his grandfathers page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/William_Worsley.

As the person in question is now in fully control of the Estate it is important that his page becomes live so he can stop being mixed up with his grandfather of the same name. For consistancy the page was written in the style of the other family pages.

Your additional help or any pointers would be greatly appreciated. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Davidallitt|Davidallitt]] ([[User talk:Davidallitt#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Davidallitt|contribs]]) 12:35, 5 November 2018 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Draft:Nathan Testa ==

Thanks for reviewing the submission, however need help with improving the article having a " formal tone for an encyclopedia article".

Could you please identify some areas and lend some feedback on ways to improve them. [[User:Udaysm|Udaysm]] ([[User talk:Udaysm|talk]]) 13:52, 5 November 2018 (UTC)

== FYI ==

You notified the wrong person of the AfC submission on the Pal Joey article. I'm not the author. I only did a copy edit and resubmitted on their behalf. [[User:Strikerforce|<span style="color:#3333cc;">'''Striker'''</span><span style="color:#330099;">'''force'''</span>]]^{[[User_talk:Strikerforce|<span style="color:#3333cc;">Talk</span>]]} 14:55, 5 November 2018 (UTC)