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'''Oracle Database''' (commonly referred to as '''Oracle RDBMSDBMS''' or simply as '''Oracle''') is a [[database]] management system developed and marketed by [[Oracle Corporation]]. Originally developed as a relational database management system (RDBMS), Oracle has been progressively enhanced to support a wide range of data modeling techniques and data types making it a [[multi-model database]] platform<ref>{{Cite web |url=http://download.oracle.com/otndocs/products/spatial/pdf/12c/Multimodel_Database_with_Oracle_Database_12c_Release_2.pdf |title=Multimodel Database with Oracle Database 12c Release 2 |access-date=1 March 2017}}</ref>. management systemThe producedOracle database includes a wide array of features to access and marketedmanage data, accelerate performance, achieve high-availability, provide security, maintain data consistency, and scale throughput. by [[Oracle Corporation]]database is the most popular database in the world as measured by market share<ref>{{Cite web|url=https://www.gartner.com/document/3769150|title=Login Page|website=www.gartner.com|language=en|access-date=2017-12-15}}</ref>.

It is a database commonly used for running online transaction processing (OLTP), data warehousing (DW) and mixed (OLTP & DW) database workloads. The latest generation, Oracle Database 18c, is available [[On-premises software|on-prem]], on-Cloud, or in a hybrid-Cloud environment. 18c may also be deployed on Oracle Engineered Systems (e.g. [[Oracle Exadata|Exadata]]) on-prem, on [[Oracle Cloud|Oracle (public) Cloud]] or (private) Cloud at Customer.<ref>http://www.oracle.com/technetwork/database/exadata/exacm-ds-3409774.pdf</ref> At Openworld 2017 in San Francisco, [[Larry Ellison|Executive Chairman of the Board and CTO, Larry Ellison]] announced the next database generation, Oracle Autonomous Database.<ref>https://www.forbes.com/sites/oracle/2017/10/02/larry-ellison-introduces-a-big-deal-the-oracle-autonomous-database/</ref>

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* Suggest we try editting the lede above to an improved version. If you are participating here be aware you maynot get attribution for your suggestions in the final article,[[User:Djm-leighpark|Djm-leighpark]] ([[User talk:Djm-leighpark|talk]]) 08:42, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

* AttributionI isn'tam necessaryprobably forsounding me.too much Justlike glada tomarketing help.person with [[User:Ccraftuse us|Ccraftof us]]the word "popular" ( [[User talk:Ccraft us|talkCcraft us]]) 14:53, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

* Does the market share reference even belong in the lead? ( [[User:Ccraft us|Ccraft us]] )

== Proposed Text ==

'''Oracle Database''' (commonly referred to as '''Oracle DBMS''' or simply '''Oracle''') is a [[database]] management system developed and marketed by [[Oracle Corporation]]. Originally developed as a relational database management system (RDBMS), Oracle has been progressively enhanced to support a wide range of data modeling techniques and data types making it a [[multi-model database]] platform<ref>{{Cite web |url=http://download.oracle.com/otndocs/products/spatial/pdf/12c/Multimodel_Database_with_Oracle_Database_12c_Release_2.pdf |title=Multimodel Database with Oracle Database 12c Release 2 |access-date=1 March 2017}}</ref>. The Oracle database includes a wide array of features to access and manage data, accelerate performance, achieve high-availability, provide security, maintain data consistency, and scale throughput. Oracle database is the most popular database in the world as measured by market share<ref>{{Cite web|url=https://www.gartner.com/document/3769150|title=Login Page|website=www.gartner.com|language=en|access-date=2017-12-15}}</ref>.

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[[User:Ccraft us|Ccraft us]] ([[User talk:Ccraft us|talk]]) 18:35, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

===Comments===

* I am probably sounding too much like a marketing person with use of the word "popular"

* Does the market share reference even belong in the lead?